Wednesday, February 24, 2010

No more Graffitti


Written by: Jennifer morocho

Have you ever wondered what your neighborhood would look like if there was no graffiti? Can't you imagine how your houses and apartments would look like if there was graffiti? It would look awful,terrible, and disgusting. My first reason why I believe graffiti is wrong is because it is illegal. My second reason is that it makes houses look messy. My third reason is that it encourages children to say bad words if it is written on the walls.

My first reason is that graffiti is illegal, and you can go to jail if you do it. What happened if everyone put graffiti on the walls of houses and apartments? Would it look messy? Yes it would look messy and disgusting! How would you feel if someone out graffiti on your house? You would get mad right? Imagine if everyone graffitied houses that are not theirs. They would go to jail! If you have gone to jail at least once, it's awful! They give you food that is badly cooked, they don't dress you right and worst of all, you can die in there from bullies and people who want to hurt you. If you went to jail, once you know what I mean. I hope you won't graffiti houses and apartments that are not yours.

My second reason is that graffiti makes houses look messy. Most people think writing graffiti on other people's houses is not wrong, but I think it is wrong! You can't out graffiti on other people's houses! It makes them messy! How would you feel if someone out graffiti on your house for revenge? Would it look messy? Would you get mad? Of course you would get mad! Who wouldn't? We can make a difference, help me fight for our rights.

Now that you have heard my argument and reasons help me fight for our rights Help me make a difference in our world. I believe graffiti is wrong, so help me stop graffiti in our world. I hope you won't do the wrong thing and please,please think about what you do before you do it. We have the power to change our world! We have the power to make a difference! So join me to fight for our rights! You can change our future!

2 comments:

  1. Excellent job! This is a very well written post, I like all three of your arguments! It is definitely illegal, and it makes houses look awful! And there are a lot of bad words too! This is great, keep it up!

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  2. This is something that really bothers me. I agree with you that it is wrong for anyone to write graffiti on any property that does not belong to them. Great job!!!

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